Inner-Self Comments
Beyond the placid place
in every peaceful place
lies the mystic clandestine
that molds how life is destine.
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This poem really resonated with me, the first two stanzas were really impressive to me. My ear stumbled a bit upon the rhyme of the first two lines of the last stanza, but I still gave this piece a 10!
Like this line: Whatever happens in the end one should be true not pretend. :)
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9/17/2025 1:53:25 PM # 1.0.0
Always be answerable to the inner self. Beautiful message. Thank you.