Tuesday, November 7, 2017

Inner-Self Of A Loner Comments

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Warm feet rest on the cold floor,
The brain focuses on the movements of muscles.
For a second, the soul can wander freely,
Oh, the muscles contract, twist and turn.
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Asavri Dhillon
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Amarjit Ghumman 09 November 2017

Dear Asavri " Leaving the waste behind." ......you have written. You have defined the value of time. Good. ..sorrow and happiness are the essential part of life. Expression through creativity is the main thing. Remember one thing. .poet is like potter. Dr.Amarjit Ghumman

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2017

Loneliness plants so many seeds in a soul ad beauty of life is felt well. The dreams beautify moment of feelings. An amazing poem is shared here...10

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Asavri Dhillon

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Chandigarh, India
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