Inner Realm -The Cloud Poem by Prabir Gayen

Inner Realm -The Cloud

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Inner Realm
The Cloud

A dense cloud slowly silently formed in the sky of my mind,
nay the heart of my being.
It is enceinte and brimming withinit's ticklish womb.
The cloud of joy and sorrow and
bearing heartache it falls within it's core.
The cloud is lonely without source,
a vagrant pain with untold misery.
The body of the cloud is formed without nucleus,
It is nothing but fatuous form of passion with no light within.
The light and shade makes it look like substance.
The form without or formless form is the cloud of my mind,
drop by drop it is formed like darkness formed with the absence of light.
A smiling face of the sun can redeem it like the knowledge of the self can redeem the being.
The cloud is formed in the sky of my mind without the joy of light,
The warm touch of the sun will make it flight with no trace behind.
The cloud is my mind and it is dense for being strong without Cognition of it's root.

Friday, September 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rudra Mondal 11 June 2020

The cloud is formed in the sky of my mind without the joy of light, The warm touch of the sun will make it flight with no trace behind. The cloud is my mind and it is dense for being strong without Cognition of it's root. ......

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 September 2018

enceinte beautiful word a real discovery rarely used in modern poetry lovely walls be built around thee cloudy

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 September 2018

BEAUTIFUL METAPHORY EXCEPT enceinte I'd have to google it

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