Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Inner Light Comments

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As I walk on a familiar road shaded with
the deepening shadows of ancient trees
that lined on both sides
I realised the shade of green during daytime vanished
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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 10 August 2020

Very interesting observation about the night and its association with life.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 29 April 2017

Darkness acts like a shawl.....a deel black blanket of sorrow, sadness, lament, torment and anguish......liked the creation.....an amazing poem.... :)

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Darren Jkoeryo 27 November 2015

Everything was transfixed except the inner light. Great statement to end the poem.

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T Rajan Evol 14 September 2015

Very well thought poem.......Touching the bases.

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Sensuelle Briden 27 August 2015

I've learnt a lot from the night, as yes, colors are different. I'd say, there are no colors at all. I like to observe and to learn from these changes. And when it's getting dark, I especially enjoy this time as it's like a moment in between, and I feel the world deeper than ever. I think it's because mostly people who actually wear social masks, right at twilight lose them till the next morning, so the informational and energetic field of Earth is getting cleaner. And I am very sensitive to this field.

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Sanjukta Nag 26 August 2015

remarkable thought..which is well expressed by the touch of poetry. very impresive. thank you.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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