Saturday, July 21, 2018

Inner Demons Comments

Rating: 4.7

The inner demons have gone
and peace has resurfaced
all bets are off the table
because I have conquered and am able
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Aqua Flower
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2018

I have conquered and am able to see without blockage in my view to see clearly the love from you releasing me from my cage inside no longer do I hide.............touching expression with nice theme. No obstacle in true love. A beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

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Carl Roussell 22 July 2018

Self doubt can be so damaging to one's psyche, being able to see the good in yourself may let you see the positive feelings others are sending; though for some keeping the demons at bay can be very challenging. A very well written and positive poem. A 10.

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Aqua Flower 22 July 2018

Exactly what the poem is about! When you are able to conquer anything the things that keep you down, you are able to shine like the sun, feel love in your soul and are able to love in return 10-fold!

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Riza Braholli 22 July 2018

from her cage and out cage you play with the word greatly...10..........

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Aqua Flower 22 July 2018

I appreciate your comment, thank you! In this poem, cage represents feeling trapped and out of cage is setting free. I'm glad you liked this poem!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 July 2018

Such a lovely write....10++++

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Aqua Flower 22 July 2018

Lovely is a lovely word...thank you!

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Khairul Ahsan 21 July 2018

A poem that's so pleasing to read and feel the joy of the poetess on her emancipation from her 'cage inside'!

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Aqua Flower 22 July 2018

Freeing from cage is a great feeling! Glad you found the poem pleasing as this comment from you is also very pleasing!

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Robert Murray Smith 21 July 2018

Such positivity is to be commended Aqua Flower.++10

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Aqua Flower 22 July 2018

Staying positive is always a goal of mine! thank you!

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Rini Shibu 21 July 2018

To see clearly the love without any obstacle is possible only if true love remains.. Good one

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Aqua Flower 22 July 2018

So true of a comment, Rini! Love clearly shines through any obstacles if it is true love!

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