Inner Conflict Comments

nice lines...done well the story told so often...indeed a conflict cheers

A good poem depicting concisely but precisely how an inner conflict looks like.

a Real Inner Conflict! Sad even Heartbreaking Situation! this is the nature of Humans Being sometiemes in Zenith other times in Nadir! ! ! Keep your Faith and Hope!

yeah the inner conflict is really like the same you expressed in thie poem...and it makes someone completely destryed...like you said in this last stanza... her heart is crying her mind is dying she is totally collapsed really a rich poem both in rythm and idea... it seems to me that you love philosophy or studnet of social psychology... well done..you can enjoy my following poems your taste type...(missing enternal face) , (people with cut heads) , (pharoah as false God) , (prisoner of the body) , (Proud love turn goddess) , (Second half) , and (teeth in the heart) .. sure they will touch you heart and soul if go through...

I can hope friend that her present state is a short transition for a life with more wisdom nice work Merna 10

Satuated with sadness. Keep writing