Inner-City762 Comments

Well, some folks evidently like this poem, but David, you've included two of what must be the top ten over-used cliches in the English language - reaching for the stars and climbing that mountain. Jeez, I don't think they even use those in high school graduation speeches anymore. The sentiment in the poem is nice, but good poetry takes more than sentiment. I think you already know that.

Beautiful poem David. Sincerely, Mary

these words are great just on there own david this is quite good i enjoyed it Warm regards allan

IF you play guiter, put capo on 2nd frett, and hit a 1,4,5 the words make more sence that way.