Friday, March 14, 2014

Inner Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

in an illusion…

in empty spaces…
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Hazel Durham 18 November 2018

Memories of childhood with the sweetness of innocence, the sweetness of always believing, we feel the beauty of real joy as our inner child giggles and plays in our subconscious, as we perform as adults but there is a time to cry for the lost child struggling to remind us of who we are! Brilliant write and it is going onto my favourite poem list!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 June 2018

The memories of the childhood have been hauntingly expressed. I quote...... On rhythm of the heart, The long-forgotten little girl, Dances before me With sparkly eyes and innocence of smile; Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 May 2016

Treasures of life! ! Love cradles me. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Colleen Courtney 14 March 2014

Lovely poem. Beautifully written. Nice job.

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