Monday, March 19, 2018

Inner Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

She felt bad when she didn't win in sports,
Classmates bullied her as she was a fatso,
Being an average in academics added to her misery,
Not being a hottie, she regretted,
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Hiteishi Jayswal
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Vaibhav Simha 23 March 2018

A great poem and straight on point, no confusions and complexity like in Shakespeare's. But compose with a proper rhyming scheme as it plays a key role in arising interest. Anyway, this is a great poem. Please read my poems especially The Dark Wonders, and comment your true opinion. Thanks.

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Hiteishi Jayswal 23 March 2018

Thank you so much sir for your honest feedback...! !

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Hiteishi Jayswal 23 March 2018

Thank you so much for your honest feedback. It means a lot.

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 March 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Hiteishi J. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Hiteishi Jayswal 23 March 2018

Thank you so much..

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Shakil Ahmed 19 March 2018

I enjoyed reading the poem, well-penned, thanks

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Hiteishi Jayswal 19 March 2018

Thank you! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2018

Bullying is so sad and thought provoking. Not wining in sports is not a big issue. Giving support to others is wise and a duty of humanity. Inner values and kindness carry beauty of attitude. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned...10

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Hiteishi Jayswal 19 March 2018

Thank you sir! !

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