She felt bad when she didn't win in sports,
Classmates bullied her as she was a fatso,
Being an average in academics added to her misery,
Not being a hottie, she regretted,
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A refined poetic imagination, Hiteishi J. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
Bullying is so sad and thought provoking. Not wining in sports is not a big issue. Giving support to others is wise and a duty of humanity. Inner values and kindness carry beauty of attitude. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned...10
A great poem and straight on point, no confusions and complexity like in Shakespeare's. But compose with a proper rhyming scheme as it plays a key role in arising interest. Anyway, this is a great poem. Please read my poems especially The Dark Wonders, and comment your true opinion. Thanks.
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