Sunday, September 3, 2023

Inkless Prayer Comments

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The dusk of mishap and clouds of blue are caverning me.
Eyeing the movements of the constellation and staring tearfully at the chimney.
Tears cascade like a deep blue ocean; my emotion is flowing whimsically.
I'm buried six feet underground; I can't believe I'm alive, questionably.
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M H 03 September 2023

this makes me emotional, i connected to this poem

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Julrick Verallo 03 September 2023

I love thissssssssss

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CJ DG 03 September 2023

this is amazing, i love this

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Acir Eryat 03 September 2023

I can relate so much, this is so wonderfulmindeed

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S December 03 September 2023

the prayer was seeing that person again, that makes sense, what a poem, full of imagery

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S S 03 September 2023

i feel the longingness, be strong, this is wonderful

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