Ink Of Rosiness! (3 Languages) Comments

You have drawn some beautiful imagery in words in this poem, Geetha! The line that I have particularly liked is: 'Verses knitted in twilight spilled from her heart' - beautiful!

I went through your poem both in English and in Hindi. Poem in both languages are touching and impressive. I quote........ किरणों के साथ वो दिल से बेहती कागज़ की खुशबू में कहीं लुप्त हो जाती डूबते सूरज को देख वह आह भरती चांदनी की नूर से कभी वो लिखती | Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

I went through your poem both in English and in Hindi. Poem in both languages are touching and impressive. I quote........ किरणों के साथ वो दिल से बेहती कागज़ की खुशबू में कहीं लुप्त हो जाती डूबते सूरज को देख वह आह भरती चांदनी की नूर से कभी वो लिखती | Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

Part 2.. And this poem has an extraordinary amount of lovely and original lines! ! She sighed on seeing the setting rays of fall / Verses knitted in twilight spilled from her heart. / / She gathered words that slipped from her palms / With stream of petals she weaves garland / When the ink leaves its imprint / Feathers drizzles on someone's heart! [- - - - As lush and gorgeous as a person could want! ! 10++++++++++

Part 1..Thank you for including English in these translations. We who speak only English thank you for going the extra mile so that we too can enjoy the beauty of your words.

WOW! Spreading the ink of rosiness through three languages! An incredible feat! Well done, poet! (10)

When the ink leaves its imprint Feathers drizzles on someone's heart! Ink that drizzled from her pen beautified themselves Passion never dies as they enlighten the bookshelves! Love these lines Geetha, lovey poem my friend.

I read the english version and I read the Hindi version. Both are amazing. I personally liked the Hindi poem more than its English version. Geetha Ji usha ki lalima jis prakar Hindi meN dikhti hay wuh ek adbhut saundarya hay jo seedha hirday meN utar Jati hay. A great poem.

She gathered words that slipped from her palms With stream of petals she weaves garland When the ink leaves its imprint Feathers drizzles on someone's heart! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -That reminds me of You! ! ! ! What a lovely poem, Geetha. Verses knitted in twilight - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - a perfect example of the magic that weaves in and out of your poem Build the bridges with droplets of ink- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -a perfect example of the wisdom that holds your poetry up.... Excellent work. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Beautiful poem! Enjoyed English and Hindi both versions. Versus are those beautiful flowers or the lovely songs that fill a poet/ poetess' heart and their reader's too. Thanks for sharing.

Perhaps the morning rays flows from her thoughts Mingles with the fragrance of fresh page slots She sighed on seeing the setting rays of fall Verses knitted in twilight spilled from her heart. She gathered words that slipped from her palms With stream of petals she weaves garland When the ink leaves its imprint Feathers drizzles on someone's heart! - - - - - - - - - - - - -Such a lovely write - - -Wow- -How the emotions flower into poetry! ! A poet only knows.

Beautiful ...... Geetha! Lovely images! The Malayalam translation also is equally good! I award you full 10. So you are a polyglot......!

That ink flows dazzling world full of readers. Thank you for sharing in three languages - I could follow only two.

What wonderful Imagery and imaginary! .. Morning rays flowing from a heart knits verses with drizzled pen, passion never goes in vein. Let it be quoted... Ink that drizzled from her pen beautified themselves Passion never dies as they enlighten the bookshelves! Lovely poem shared. Full vote.

What beautiful imagery- - - - - - - - - - - - - -] Verses knitted in twilight spilled from her heart. She gathered words that slipped from her palms With stream of petals she weaves garland - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -]Choosing such image-creating words was a large part of it, the images themselves were so immediate, I could see them happening right before my eyes- -thus the penning of this poem left a sweeeeeeeeet impact on my senses. Thank you, dear Geetha 10's

A nice poetic imagination, Geetha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks