Ink In My Pen... Comments

Yes the metaphor Ink in pen is marvellous and the way you wrote it gave a philosophical touch..10/10

Assemble of thoughts! ! Thanks for sharing.

hope you know mans ink never dries....till he finally and physically actually dies all watch him as he lies till the last he continues to try and so a drop or two does come through and another poem he can squeeze with ease as all come to see him so please d dying was he did you say he lives on for many more a days till the ink is wet again for deliverance ere he enters gods domain and then after his ashes no ink does remain his pen breaks alas sad tis but isn't that life yes 'tis

Class poem from the master poet, Asim....

Very amazing poem this is. Really world is just like a paper and this assembles our thoughts very interestingly. Nice sharing done definitely. Feeling is pen to write on this.10