The twinkle of a star
the color of a car
is never seen and adored
By the one with the Ink-Eyes.
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I really like the way you describe 'Ink-Eyes' obvious displeasure for those who can see all the things she cannot.
I love it. Great work. Definitely your best piece, of the ones I've read so far.
I liked this poem...is the girl blind? Ink-Eyes is a creative way of describing it.
I like it because it's simple, short but very vivid too. Good one