Tuesday, February 22, 2005

Ink-Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.4

The twinkle of a star
the color of a car
is never seen and adored
By the one with the Ink-Eyes.
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Matthew Hyatt
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Carolyn (Cy) Vuletic 16 November 2005

I like it because it's simple, short but very vivid too. Good one

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Mary Lyle 07 November 2005

I really like the way you describe 'Ink-Eyes' obvious displeasure for those who can see all the things she cannot.

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Kim McInnis 06 March 2005

I love it. Great work. Definitely your best piece, of the ones I've read so far.

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Nicholas Jankowski 27 February 2005

I liked this poem...is the girl blind? Ink-Eyes is a creative way of describing it.

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Poetry Hound 22 February 2005

Kind of interesting, ultimately impossible to figure out.

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Matthew Hyatt

Matthew Hyatt

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