Thursday, April 27, 2006
Ink Comments
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They'er not very clever
when they need a pencil
and an eraser,
cause they can't think
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David Darbyshire
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Mike Finley
27 April 2006
I use a pen - you just scratch everything out you don't like, and whatever's left, is what you've got. Sweet poem, David!
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8/23/2025 12:18:48 PM # 1.0.0
Cute, David! I write with ink and the thing is, I like seeing all the changes - scratched out words/restored words, etc. It's really good looking back at the first rough draft and however many others, if any, between that and the final version. Of course, after posting, I still find the need to edit! ... Thanks for the funny today!