Friday, September 9, 2011

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Against the sky
The leaves and seeds
Await my brush
And betrayal
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michael oliver
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Rachel Butler 26 October 2011

...'And betrayal'... RAB

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Vipins Puthooran 04 October 2011

Fantastic! beautiful poem..(seed/leaves/brush) ....

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Subodh Pandey 26 September 2011

Beautifully crafted write. I liked the use of seed and leaves the most.

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Stefanie Fontker 11 September 2011

Short and powerful. This is a very beautiful piece, and it's very mysterious.

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