Monday, March 7, 2005

Ink Comments

Rating: 4.0

I dip my feather pen into you,
ink bottle of inspiration,
as I dip my tongue into you
your perspiration,
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Nasra Al Adawi 09 April 2005

Its true its a remarkable poem...Loved the name...very attractive title...just by reading the title...

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i swear, i don't understand how a poem like this could get such a low score. yours is some of the most vivid and provoking poetry here. i always enjoy seeing your name up on the homepage. keep them coming. Jake

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Poetry Hound 07 March 2005

Some nice images in this piece. I particularly like '...condensing ourselves into ripples of black ink and soon we all become raven-haired.' Wow.

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