I dip my feather pen into you,
ink bottle of inspiration,
as I dip my tongue into you
your perspiration,
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i swear, i don't understand how a poem like this could get such a low score. yours is some of the most vivid and provoking poetry here. i always enjoy seeing your name up on the homepage. keep them coming. Jake
Some nice images in this piece. I particularly like '...condensing ourselves into ripples of black ink and soon we all become raven-haired.' Wow.
Its true its a remarkable poem...Loved the name...very attractive title...just by reading the title...