Saturday, August 12, 2017

Injured Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's been awhile since I looked into her eyes
Beautiful smile that brought me to the sky
Tender joy inside of me reside
Intensely keeping me alive
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Raul G. Miranda
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 August 2017

Something about her I cannot describe Soulfully brighten up my life A woman I cannot have Much more to love... love and dreams and portrayed very well. thank you tony

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Rini Shibu 14 August 2017

Some people are not Meant for us but still we love them Beautifully inscribed

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Resh Kav 13 August 2017

Good Poem. Thanks for sharing

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Raul G. Miranda 12 August 2017

Thanks guys...

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Chinedu Dike 12 August 2017

The temperamental and whimsical nature of an enigmatic spiritual experience that is love, are aptly captured in the poem. Thanks for sharing Raul.

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Raul. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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