Saturday, February 20, 2010

Initiation Comments

Rating: 5.0

The evening air spreading its soft chill,
Playing with the blue mountain to nature's will,
New snow flakes engulfs the barren hills,
Taming my heart with tender warmth and thrills.
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Jai K Garg
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 February 2010

It’s a voluptuous stuff …dynamite effect LOL! But I thumb’s up with: ‘…Taming my heart with tender warmth and thrills….’ Here I take taming as, ‘Correct by punishment or discipline’… Well addressed ...thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita 10 UK

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