Sunday, July 22, 2007
Initial Attraction Comments
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What lies beneath the surface smile?
which you display to everyone?
The mask you wear to be in style.
What lies beneath is yours alone.
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Jennifer Perryman
12 January 2008
Hi Ivor, I am not sure what this rhyme is called. It is magnificent. You are such a talented Poet....Wow! ... What lies behind the mask, I think we wear many. Not me, of course...LOL Brilliant and Beautiful Poem.......'Enjoyed'
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8/15/2025 7:20:11 AM # 1.0.0
You are very talented. I love the structure of this poem, very clever and very effective. love it. U have so many of them aswel. How long hav you bin writing? im goin 2 read them all, but not in one day lol look 4ward 2 readin more and if u wish u are more than welcome 2 read mine