Wednesday, April 22, 2009

'Inhibited' Love? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gusting ice on passionate nature, a love
That favours repression holds back in shame.
It parades it's sham submission, and above
All it sees restraint as a must, and blames
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Fay Slimm
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I totally agree with every word said..every single one

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Lynda Robson 22 April 2009

There should be no inhibitions between true lovers, a thought provoking piece Fay Lynda xx 10

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Fiona Davidson 22 April 2009

Lot of food for thought here Fay...very deep write....Fi 10+++

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Sue Sie 22 April 2009

Fay... this is a very meaningful poem...well thought out..10++ Sue

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Tsira Goge 22 April 2009

You very deeply write, Fay... 10... Kindest regards, Tsira

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 22 April 2009

I think culture is more an inhibiting factor to love, it should be love with out limits... Andy 10

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Sandra Martyres 22 April 2009

Some how or other we are all inhibited - whether it is natural or cultivatedowing to social taboos...is difficult to say...great write.10

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Lalitha iyer 22 April 2009

But, Kissing in the public is prohibited.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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