Tuesday, April 21, 2009

Inheritance Comments

Rating: 5.0

These pews don’t lend themselves to private grief.
A well of tears leaks down my cold, cold cheeks.
Her family must be wondering who we are.
Strangers treading on their private sorrow.
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Janet Budd
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Christine Kerr 21 April 2009

Well Done Janet, You explained vividly the many thoughts that goes through mind during this very quite time.

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Susan Jarvis 21 April 2009

A magnificent display of figurative language used here, from the title to the closing lines, this poem connects with the reader on many levels. A well crafted, tender poem. S :)

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Colin J... 21 April 2009

There is only on word for this poem full of feeling... Brillant... Colin J...10

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

a true poem.. full of emotion and thought..wonderful work

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Janet Budd

Janet Budd

Oldham, UK
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