Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Inheritance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Man has inherited amazingly immense wealth-
from his mom - mother earth.
From his dad - the valient sun
man wants to inherit the moon.
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Babatunde Aremu 12 November 2012

Great poem. Man's desire to possess all leads to unquenchable search for new grounds. In other to inherit all, new discoveries are made daily.

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with the rises in population and stuff. we need new palces to live.. nice write.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 17 March 2009

Sky is the limit for the advancement of science and technology. No wonder, if man settles himself in the moon or mars in course of time.

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 March 2009

I love to read items that have real meanings to impart to the public. Pieces that have something to say have added value in my view. This piece is not just about the subject it addresses, it can apply to a wide array of things as well. I liked it. GW62

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Vaibhav Pandey 11 March 2009

very unique and thoughtprovoking...how do you come up with these thoughts? ? ? ...Sam, great thoughts...10

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Catrina Heart 07 February 2009

unique poem...fine theme about natural wonders of this world and its abundance...crafted in vivid and lovely poetic verses...10+++

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Indira Renganathan 18 January 2009

Today it's helium from moon..but in puranic times what was it that rishis and acharyas found out to learn and teach about all planets..may be helium then was one of moon's 27 wives...great10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 11 January 2009

yeah this universe doesnt belong to men..........

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Greenwolfe 1962 10 January 2009

A philosophical writing . Good title . Spurs thinking . Inspirational as well. GW62

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Meggie Gultiano 28 December 2008

nicely said...thanks for the wisdom you shared. Hugs, Meggie

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 December 2008

wow...very.interesting write sir....beautiful poetry with Scientific touch....reality, fantasy and science merging into an interesting piece...a poetry on mythology of your own making....interesting and touching....inheritance for the next generations? everybody should think of it...we have to take care of mother earth and everything that the next generations will be happy.....10++++++++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 03 December 2008

You are right Sir! thought provoking piece.

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Kesav Easwaran 29 November 2008

rightly said, SL...if you talk of inheritance, it is moon that has a right over earth and not for earth over moon...very interesting write...i liked 10

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premji premji 21 November 2008

dear narayan, it's man's supreme greed... none can prevent that.... we are living embodiments of greed

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