High on the Natural, all else pales
In the splendor of feeling, inhale
The breath going out, it commences
A balm, soothing the senses
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The flowing rhymes are simply delightful....This piece shares so much gentleness surrounding the reader with the warmth of your poetic heart.....beautiful
Such a warm poem Linda. I like your style of penning. I give this write a 10.
Heart is humming a merry tune With all that is good I commune......... Very ASTONISHING verses Ms. Linda......An excellent explanation of experience you grasped.....Especially the last two lines are really well-written describing the fairness of your heart...absolute 10....Best Regards.....
I love it. I love the rhyme and the flow of it. I love the warm feel of it. Great job, Linda. Warm regards Ron
i like this a lot very unique great piece
How delightful. For some reason the atmosphere your describe is one of good news that all to share.