Monday, June 29, 2020

Inhabitants Of The Night Sky Comments

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In my childhood days,
I used to see my dad come back from work
In the evening, and relax after having a wash.
Reclining on an easy chair in the courtyard,
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Khairul Ahsan
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Bharati Nayak 24 August 2020

Let me quote from this amazing poem- - Today, when I gaze at the night sky, in solitude, I find not one, But many, many of the faces that once loved me, Those that I loved too, Those that are no more here, Smile at me peeping out from the little stars, Beckoning at me with the same loving eyes! As they sleep in the heavens, their souls appear; Some shine, some twinkle, from the canopy afar!

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Khairul Ahsan 05 December 2020

Thanks for doing the honours. Quoting lines from his poem greatly inspires a poet. Much appreciate your thoughtfulness, @Bharat Nayak.

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Bharati Nayak 24 August 2020

What a lovely poem about the Night sky and lovely memories embedded in our heart like the shining stars that fill us with joy.To my poem list.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 December 2020

Dear Bharati, Many thanks for this huge favour. I am immensely honoured by your picking up of my humble poem for your 'MyPoemList'. God Bless!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 August 2020

A touching poem so full of emotion. I loved the narration how your father taught you to look at the sky and the stars. True, the departed souls are stars that shine and guide us in our path. Beautiful poem that shines like a star, ......10

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Khairul Ahsan 05 December 2020

'Beautiful poem that shines like a star' - Take a bow, Dr. Geeta! The comment shall shine here for ever as an inspiration!

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Tom Allport 15 August 2020

A wonderful thoughtful write of happy memories still in sight....well penned

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Khairul Ahsan 05 December 2020

@Tom Allport, Thank you very much for visiting and appreciating my poem. Appreciate this encouragement.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 July 2020

A wonderful and touching write. A great remembrance of yesteryears that makes the heart flutter and mind tingle. A marvelous poem woven by a highly creative and imaginative mind.10++

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Khairul Ahsan 05 December 2020

@Rose Marie Juan-austin, Thanks for visiting my page and leaving this kind comment on my poem. Your appreciation has inspired me a lot, thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2020

A great philosophical poem on the base of stars and galaxy has been astutely delineated by you dear poet in, I appreciate the way of presentation. Beautiful poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 December 2020

Thanks for reading my poem, @Kumarmani Mahakul. I am much inspired by your appreciative comment.

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 June 2020

As they sleep in the heavens, their souls appear; Some shine, some twinkle, from the canopy afar! ......childhood time was lovely, imaginative beautiful........still the inhabitants of the sky are alive; but time is fact and the mind does not allow everyone to imagine the far dwellers like the childhood time.......superbly written....10+

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Khairul Ahsan 01 December 2020

Thank you for reading my poem and leaving a thoughtful comment, @Mahtab Bangalee.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 June 2020

A wonderfully composed fantastic poem....10+++

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Khairul Ahsan 24 November 2020

@Bernard F. Asuncion, Thanks for your kind appreciation and generous appraisal. I feel so honored!

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