Wednesday, December 9, 2015

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I know island thing
with tiny clothing
under trees smoking
passing time nothing
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Manonton Dalan
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Captain Herbert Poetry 22 December 2015

...a very nice poem with the ing. Intelligent

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Paul Warren 09 December 2015

Clever use of the ing at the end of each line. Conveys an air of the usual.

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Manonton Dalan

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