Influence Comments

Er also line two I guess you could say bloss'ming, instead. Tom

Facing life with the muse of your works! Thanks for sharing.

Kawa. Alter the fifth line.. should be blossoming. You've missed an o This is a very beautiful and deep poem. I agree with Subhas and shall give you a 10. Tom Billsborough

Beautiful ending, highly philosophical, good poem. Loved it much, I rate it at 10. Thanks for the poem. Keep it up. Do visit other poet's pages too. Subhas