Monday, May 9, 2016

Influence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Near me
Flowers are blossoming
Day by day
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Kawa Karpo
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Tom Billsborough 09 May 2016

Er also line two I guess you could say bloss'ming, instead. Tom

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Pen Ta 09 May 2016

Yes

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 May 2016

Facing life with the muse of your works! Thanks for sharing.

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Tom Billsborough 09 May 2016

Kawa. Alter the fifth line.. should be blossoming. You've missed an o This is a very beautiful and deep poem. I agree with Subhas and shall give you a 10. Tom Billsborough

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Pen Ta 09 May 2016

Thanks your idea

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 May 2016

Beautiful ending, highly philosophical, good poem. Loved it much, I rate it at 10. Thanks for the poem. Keep it up. Do visit other poet's pages too. Subhas

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Pen Ta 09 May 2016

Thanks for your support

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