Tuesday, May 15, 2012

Inflicted Upon Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I drew the sterile drapes and readied the scalpel.
The patient was prepped and breathing quietly,
The face so relaxed- as only I had seen it, many times before:
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Patti Masterman
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Rajendran Muthiah 24 May 2012

you had the courage to see the scars of the brutal attacks made on the special engine of your beloved. But you can't see the wounds inflicted by you(?) on that ruby flesh. Wonderful!

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Eric Cockrell 18 May 2012

stunning... powerful images!

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Smoky Hoss 17 May 2012

The willingness to go deep is not an easy affair, nor painless. Superb, emotional poetry.

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Simon Collins 17 May 2012

Really enjoyable read! Fascinating, thank you

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Johnathan Juarez 15 May 2012

quite brilliant this one your voice is so strong and wise without pretentiousness

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