Friday, September 28, 2018

Infinity And Love Comments

Rating: 4.9

I am prepared for a long and unending journey
Telescopes of my eyes are set far on the infinity
On my right hand is the boat loaded by my good deeds
On my left hand is the boat loaded by my misdeeds
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Dr Antony Theodore 27 December 2018

On my right hand is the boat loaded by my good deeds On my left hand is the boat loaded by my misdeeds Water from the divine river......... a very fine poem.. evil, good, a great moral philsophy.. very nice poem my dear Akhtar. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 October 2018

wonderfully penned - On the sky it's sun safeguarding the boundaries On the earth I have the self-thinking foundries /// nice picture

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 October 2018

A wonderful imaginative write. Beautifully crafted.10++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2018

Life's infinite journey is witnessed through natural imagery. Life full of love and peace motivates direction of journey. Capturing a glittering gold we move ahead. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned...10

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