Wednesday, September 27, 2006

Infinity Comments

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You, are why I'll never love again
They, will hurt me till the end
We, will forever be hated
I, have hurt so many
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Courtney Chapman
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Foster Blaine 27 September 2006

suggestion: omit all the commas (after you, they, we, i etc.) - your point will still be received. all this superfluous punctuation messes up the flow. foster

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