suggestion: omit all the commas (after you, they, we, i etc.) - your point will still be received. all this superfluous punctuation messes up the flow.
foster
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suggestion: omit all the commas (after you, they, we, i etc.) - your point will still be received. all this superfluous punctuation messes up the flow. foster