Friday, June 20, 2014

Infinity Comments

Rating: 5.0

It seems like a dream
A dream of parallel lines
A never meeting point
Melting like a candle
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sekharan pookkat
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Neela Nath Das 02 July 2014

A longing for meeting a dear person, the desire before death- - - - - - -this thought has touched deeply.A superb write!

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Heather Wilkins 02 July 2014

lovely thought. seeing a love one once again would be delightful

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 July 2014

Beautiful poem, short and sweet. Desire to meet some one dearest once in life at least before death. Wonderful lines. Loved reading it.

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Lydia Monet 21 June 2014

Very passionate. I LIKE this!

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Neela Nath Das 20 June 2014

A great longing it is! And a fantastic poem from your pen.Loved.

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Gajanan Mishra 20 June 2014

fae that disappears, love disappears, good writing, thanks. please read my poems and comment,

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