Infinity Comments
When I missed you
on a fateful day,
and my mental sustenance
was drained with misery,
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Wow! What a power! " the universe with colder stars and older lights, then night will reign for eternity across forevers sights. - and me an ancient lady in timelessness unfree will wander the spatial deserts"
a haunting poem of what might have been? instead the wish of darkness can now be seen! ............wonderfully written.
You shared a moment of pain and lonliness felt deeply. I was moved by your words.
Beautifully woven mystic words. Lovely poem. (10)
and me an ancient lady in timelessness unfree will wander the spatial deserts into infinity. thank you
Wonderful poem, needing only a comma after the word SPIN on line seven and an apostrophe in the word FOREVER'S in line fifteen. Well done, and congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the Day!
Hi! Kim. Thanks fo pointing out the comma bit. I’ll correct it when I can. All the best to you.e
A very well crafted poem with deep insights on a great loss.... Quite lovely.
In sadness, when one wants to isolate oneself, every thing including light is a curse. Naturally one needs sun to go down quickly. A touching poem, indeed. Congratulations!
Sadness expressed so beautifully in a situation we must all face seeing as you write colder stars and older lights, there is one bright light for we will all meet again, for I have booked a seat on the front row near the choir! regards
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7/23/2025 3:21:30 PM # 1.0.0
Silently violent poem. Kicking the reader 8n the heart.