Sunday, August 1, 2021

Infinity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Midnight strikes, and moonbeams howl
spiraling waves of ivory
Like charcoal lines of an old crone's face
Her wisdoms seldom savory
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Kevin Patrick
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MAHTAB BANGALEE 09 February 2023

On the symmetry of our divinity Forever bound to infinity ~ greatly ended the poem; nice to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POD

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 08 February 2023

Eloquent piece, Kevin

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 February 2023

Congratulations, Kevin for having this poem chosen as Poem Of The Day. I concur with all the great comments on this poem. So true, hauntingly beautiful....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 February 2023

Each and every stanza of this spellbinding write stands out. Superb imagery with wonderful poetic expressions. To my favorites.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 February 2023

' And the seas meet the drowned sky', ' On the symmetry of our divinity...Forever bound to infinity... Mystical lines that hold us spellbound.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 February 2023

The three amazing opening lines contain crystalline images that grip a reader and appreciate the totality of this beautiful, beautiful poem.

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Rob Lamberton 07 February 2023

A worthy write! I can see why it received POD. Congratulations!

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Richard Wlodarski 07 February 2023

Echoes of Leonard Cohen. You've done him justice! Heartiest of Congrats on a Much Deserved POD, Kevin!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 February 2023

Heartiest Congratulations on the Poem of the day.........Forever bound in divinity.....To my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 February 2023

Beautiful poem Kevin. Mysterious and captivating..........Top score

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me poet yeps poet 07 February 2023

HI KEVIN PAT...WE USED TO READ each others poems now lost em all in the wilderness

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 August 2021

hauntingly beautiful

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