Infinitely Comments

Very atmospheric and Poe-like in its umtensity

A nice poem on such a dark subject!

.........extraordinary poem, a very dark write..I like this ★

Quite Interesting. Love the use of word and the perspective of moving one mind then stop and move again is quite okay. The Imagery are quite understandable and vivid, showcase of horror. Nice one.

The terror of the night.. Such an apt poem for all acts of despicable violence being perpetuated across the world..

Perfect rhyme scheme and beautiful and powerful metaphors, i love the imagery and the cadence. A great poem it is

And roadways that stretch out like sails And pass each other, coming unfolded in the distance, soundlessly, While lengthening beneath the stars, Through the shadows and the terror of the night. Great lines. Liked it.

Beautiful poem describing the human psyche and it's relationship with the infinity. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

Based on context I believe the word 'plane' in the third line of stanza two should be 'plain'.