From infinite depths of heaven,
warrior clouds
ignite the universe
to flame.....................
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Sweet and serene and comforting as monsoon showers on heated earth...gud one
Ha ha, that surprised me. I was expecting something bad to happen and then we got kissed. Very clever. Good poetry.
this is a perfect example of allowing th eemotions to shape the form...
A superb canvass of spiritual grandeur culminating in a pair of lips. From the sublime to the sublimely personal. Beautiful indeed. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Superb imagination....a good flow of words...nectar pouring10+++
wow ma'am...this amazing and i really felt these lines...hey it is bit like a phrase from a thriller...this is something different from what i v read from yours.... shows you are versatile writer ma'am...10++ with lots of love shan
Perchance to dream a nightmare than be freed from its spell by a gentle kiss.The moods that colour our days.A ten from me, mostly because of its imagery and depth.
i think sid got it mixed up kisses turn frogs to princes...... why turn it around..; -) linda beautiful words.....like rain stirs earth so do kisses, aching humans cheers
To be awakened by a kiss is simply bliss.To be kissed by a hog may transform you into...a frog... Sid.x
Lovely poem of showers heaven sent and ending just how I would love to wake up, how could we do without this wonder first but not last visit uavaniceday regards