Looking over the fields towards the Sun,
Observing that the rain had just begun,
A freshness seemed to permeate the air,
And all that one could do was, stand and stare,
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A lovely picture of serenity Ernestine, Excellent work. Love Andrew x
A fine lyrical poem from a fine painter of words. Filled with colour and light, your words shine. Bless you Ernestine. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
What a lovely poem of the worlds beauty Ernestine. Rainbows almost seem magical don't they? How can such a thing appear? Oh, this was so nice! Sincerely, Mary
A perfect ode to a rainbow. Repeat for a double rainbow? Lovely. -chuck
Thank you for the beautiful picture drawn by your words. Patricia
It has become so apparent Ernestine, that if you have not seen it then the chances are, it was never really there.Your words fill and amaze me and all through this you have shown such strength and conviction towards your reader and towards the heart.Love Duncan
A beautiful piece reflecting the wondrous portrait of a rainbow, yielded from the harvest of splendid imagery and viscous rhyme. A refreshing read. - K.
This is a comment on the previous comments: yessss! ! Great poem!