Friday, May 19, 2017
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Look out with eyeful
tell me what you see.
This world is full
of make believe.
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Taylor Hainline
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7/27/2025 7:30:41 AM # 1.0.0
Taylor, forcing the rhymes distort the poem (for example, lines 13 and 15,14 and 16) . You need to immerse yourself in some good contemporary poetry if you're going to improve. Check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know what you think. Yrs, JC
It was a poem written out of experiment and for a friend who started it with me. I cannot change what they gave me before they left.