Thursday, March 24, 2016

Infidelity Comments

Rating: 4.5

Should I even open the door?
I don't want to cry anymore.
My hurt stems from my core,
Because I saw signs that I did ignore.
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Atasha Williams
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Jenny Taylor 21 June 2016

Why did you lie to me? I thought we were meant to be... I was blind but now I see, You had another agenda without me... Powerful depiction of emotions, indeed! So many can relate to this at some point in their life! It is a reality I have shared a few times over many moons ago, but thank God I stepped out of the way when He sent someone worthy, 14 years ago today! ! Thanks for sharing!

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 May 2016

I don't want to cry anymore. Love and pain! Thanks for sharing.

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Juan Olivarez 25 March 2016

very powerful poem, I hope its just your imagination. nobody needs that.

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Atasha Williams

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