Infidelity Comments

tragic, love and separation. it is beautifully expressed and very tender. thank you

A tender exploration of a sensitive subject! Please read 'Stolen Moments.'

The interesting thing about this poem is that only the second and fourth verses are necessary. In fact, those two verses alone would make this a better poem. Normally, this is not the case. But it is here. By the way, the last verse could even stand alone as a poem. It is that good. Well done. Greenwolfe 1962

This is a beautifully and flawlessly written poem, Laurena, not something I get to see every day on Poem Hunter. Your phrasing and word choices, as well as imagery throughout the poem is quite exceptional. Even better, your story telling ability is outstanding. You clearly held every reader's attention from the beginning to the ending word wonderfully. Carl.

A very captivating.poem.

fantastic write.....very smooth. 10

Excellent write...enjoyed reading this...the flow is wonderful...thank you for sharing it...Fi

great write..well implied quick moment of love...lovely...10