Galactic wildfire
Outshining the lovely stars
Inferno on Earth
Flattened a beautiful town
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Rose is the most sympathetic poet with nature, and she deserves to be like that because many of her beautiful poems come from the heart of nature, and this is the reason for her calmness, serenity and beauty
"Inferno on earth " sums it all up. Forcefully rendered. Congratulations. Full score.
Excellent in few words...highly expressive...specially the last three lines...top score
Meaningful. Galactic fire outshines stars. Inferno on earth perishes
Powerfully expressed the devastation, heartbreak, the sorrows left, the aftermath! .. Oh so heart felt! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
The sad truth is brought to light by your beautiful, haunting imagery.5 stars.
C) Crystal clear weaved and rendered Tanka. Enjoy your day dearest friend!
B) but uncountable towns all over the world are taken away their dreams and hopes, everywhere, sure. This Tanka makes the start to think further and deeper, poet's task to give such a thought-provoking philosophy, and the great Poetess has that success.
A) Rereading this thought-provoking philosophy: Flattened a beautiful town Took away its dreams and hopes, this is only one line in this impressive Tanka,
well penned poignant poem it deserves 5 Stars as usual brilliant
Inferno on Earth Flattened a beautiful town Took away its dreams and hopes.
Assaulting nature harms all creatures, but the boat always sinks because of a hole anywhere. The fire is beautiful when we sit near it to warm up in the winter, but if it goes beyond its limits and gets angry, it burns green and dry, thanks for this philosophical poem.
Excellent description of what an Inferno on Earth can be.A disastrous situation sung by impeccable poetry.
How dreams just disappear into the fire! Power poem of a true happening.
Natural disasters like floods or fire are devastating. Many innocent lives are lost.
Paradise California: destroyed by fire,2018 : (