Thursday, October 7, 2021

Inferno On Earth - Tanka Comments

Rating: 5.0

Galactic wildfire
Outshining the lovely stars
Inferno on Earth
Flattened a beautiful town
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
COMMENTS
Bri Edwards 31 October 2021

Paradise California: destroyed by fire,2018 : (

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Soran M. H 29 October 2021

Rose is the most sympathetic poet with nature, and she deserves to be like that because many of her beautiful poems come from the heart of nature, and this is the reason for her calmness, serenity and beauty

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Soran M. H 29 October 2021

Inferno on Earth Flattened a beautiful town

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 October 2021

"Inferno on earth " sums it all up. Forcefully rendered. Congratulations. Full score.

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Indira Renganathan 19 October 2021

Excellent in few words...highly expressive...specially the last three lines...top score

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Meaningful. Galactic fire outshines stars. Inferno on earth perishes

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Rebecca Navarre 18 October 2021

Powerfully expressed the devastation, heartbreak, the sorrows left, the aftermath! .. Oh so heart felt! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Kostas Lagos 14 October 2021

I love this one! Very impressive!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 10 October 2021

The sad truth is brought to light by your beautiful, haunting imagery.5 stars.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 October 2021

C) Crystal clear weaved and rendered Tanka. Enjoy your day dearest friend!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 October 2021

B) but uncountable towns all over the world are taken away their dreams and hopes, everywhere, sure. This Tanka makes the start to think further and deeper, poet's task to give such a thought-provoking philosophy, and the great Poetess has that success.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 October 2021

A) Rereading this thought-provoking philosophy: Flattened a beautiful town Took away its dreams and hopes, this is only one line in this impressive Tanka,

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Soran M. H 09 October 2021

well penned poignant poem it deserves 5 Stars as usual brilliant

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Soran M. H 09 October 2021

Inferno on Earth Flattened a beautiful town Took away its dreams and hopes.

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Soran M. H 09 October 2021

Assaulting nature harms all creatures, but the boat always sinks because of a hole anywhere. The fire is beautiful when we sit near it to warm up in the winter, but if it goes beyond its limits and gets angry, it burns green and dry, thanks for this philosophical poem.

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Sandra Feldman 08 October 2021

Excellent description of what an Inferno on Earth can be.A disastrous situation sung by impeccable poetry.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 October 2021

Top stars dear Poetess for this profound poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 October 2021

How dreams just disappear into the fire! Power poem of a true happening.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 October 2021

Natural disasters like floods or fire are devastating. Many innocent lives are lost.

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Varsha M 08 October 2021

Sometimes life gives us such challenges. Well written.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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