Friday, November 11, 2005

Infatuation Ruins Comments

Rating: 4.5

Decades ago, the waste of infatuation
hidden in my wallet pocket
a crumbled rose, a piece of stale
chocolate waiting to be eaten
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Louise Marie DelSanto
COMMENTS
Bill Smith 18 February 2006

been a while since I visited the site, glad I did, as Peter says, the last three lines.wow

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Peter A. Crowther 26 January 2006

I love the imagery of the last three lines

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Mary Nagy 11 November 2005

I really like this poem Louise. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary

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***** ********* 11 November 2005

All I can say Louise, is that when love hit you and sticks, it develops and even a wart on their nose wouldn't stop you loving them. Infatuations are meant to be gotten over, or how would we survive? 9 from one who knows these things! Grinning Tai

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