Monday, August 17, 2020

Infatuation (Plus Hindi Version) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Infatuation is like a lens
You see things spangled with dew
As if at the dawn of creation
A crack suddenly opens to reveal
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Pallavi Tripathi 06 April 2023

At the dawn of creation the revelation I liked it.

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Savita Tyagi 05 April 2023

Ravi Kopra's translation is also pretty good.

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Savita Tyagi 05 April 2023

Beautiful poem. Infatuation indeed is like a lense clouded with exotic snowflakes. Love all the imagery. Computer translation in another language usually do not express the thoughts and imagery very well, still I think one can get some sense out of it.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 02 April 2023

Infatuation is, indeed, like a lens that shows you only what you want to see, not the real thing. When the lens crack, reality seeps in. Infatuation disappears and the truth prevails.. in.

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 September 2020

Depths of two canyons are trading echoes A singer flexing the muscles of her voice... excellent expression about the infatuation; infatuation! a passion a fashion of desire a desire a burning dream on the realistic ramp not though the skin eyes but by the eyes of heart it hopes it expects, it feels the graph of sweet union in life even in the rampage triangle estuary!

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Denis Mair 17 July 2023

I absolutely love Mahtab Bangalee's phrase '...RAMPAGE TRIANGLE ESTUARY'!

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Unwritten Soul 01 September 2020

Sound so happy and merry here, Infatuation made the poem as a picture, as if the language existed in shape and colour!

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Bharati Nayak 27 August 2020

Infatuation is like a lens You see things spangled with dew As if at the dawn of creation A crack suddenly opens to reveal The canyon of someone's inner history- -It is wonderful perception- a view about infatuation.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 August 2020

Echoes! ! ! ! Voices and choices. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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