Wednesday, July 17, 2013

Infatuation Comments

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Infatuation is a
temporary emotion
ever fleeting as
a drifting cloud.
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Heather Burns
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Sallam Yassin 18 July 2013

Only core is stable- go to heart peel the cover and the love for the god / bright thought provoking the mind

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Yasmin Khan 18 July 2013

An extravagant passion described well in the symbolism of Nature.

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 July 2013

Beautiful write..Very well compared to nature..enjoyed reading it... Thank you.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 July 2013

Infatuation... ever fleeting as a drifting cloud. Nicely stated. The poem warns about temporary emotions. Thank you.

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Valsa George 18 July 2013

Infatuation is the immature form of love between the sexes! It is short lived, comes quickly like a wind and bursts out like a bubble! So never take it serious! Love this beautiful write! !

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James Mclain 17 July 2013

Mascara flows beneath the breadth of chloe then disappeared....iip

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James Mclain 17 July 2013

Mascara flows beneath the breadth of chloe then disappeared....iip

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James Mclain 17 July 2013

Mascara flows beneath the breadth of chloe then disappeared....iip

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Patricia Grantham 17 July 2013

I love this one Heather. Infatuation is just a sweet fleeting moment of love. Its just like a bird that sits on a branch then quickly flies away. Hmm! I have to think whether I have ever been infatuated with anyone. Ha! Ha! . Enjoyed.

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Lyn Paul 17 July 2013

Put together well Heather, particularly love the title of these wonderful words.

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