Tuesday, November 20, 2007

Inevitable Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

Having suffered a chronic illness
often depleting causing weakness
sweat, hypertension, and coughing
pneumonia infected lungs nagging
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Kenneth Romano 16 December 2007

oh so it reflects the inner and deepest of emotions. quite stirring po. but it reaches deep po. i love this piece...

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Leonard Daranjo 20 November 2007

Hi Marvin, you are absolutely right - life is indeed an inevitable journey we must go through. Nice piece - specially the last two lines - a well deserved 10. Take care

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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