Inevitability Comments

HOPELESS.... u should not for every tomorrw theres alwaz a hope tho colors turned to dull nd to black n the future but alwaz in mind, ur brain is on ur head, , , u r the one who made urself who knows more about urself so, , , sigh? dongive it a chance. naizz

Deeply rich in texture, my friend. Wonderful poem.

a beautiful sunset takes your breath away and leaves you..'with a sigh'...your imagery is always great.

Got a real dark feeling reading the poem