Sunday, January 27, 2013

Inertia Is The Greatest Sin Comments

Rating: 5.0

No mountain is forever built.
Flowers bloom then they wilt,
nature's forces wear them down,
forever lost and never found.
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Captain Cur
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Patricia Grantham 04 February 2013

I love this poem, you have to do something to make life work Thanks

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Shahzia Batool 28 January 2013

From the introductory idea till the culmination in the end, your composition is measured by all line & length...good poetry with a result in our hand: A heart must act or never win. Inertia is the greatest sin!

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