Inequitable Love Comments

Enjoyed this surreal poem.

Creative thinking and fabulous writing.

Awesome poem, immortal love between the celestial bodies, never thought that way now will.5*

Loved this Tango dance of the moon and the earth! Marvellous! Top, top marks

Excellent poem. Liked it TRE

Though may look far from reality and realization yet it is soothing when one count it in lovers term. Wonderful poem.

I enjoyed the line mentioing the tango I thought it was brilliant

Such a wonderful write....

2) BUT I forgot ONE thing YOU are a poet and with our poetic art, we can write as many poems as we wish, Yiou are very RIGHT, Mr. Asim Sir! Scintillatingly written!

1) in such a relationship, the justification cannot be realized, really not, but you did cut a nice poem out of it and that counts! 5 Stars full for this enjoyable poem. Love is my theme but not in this situation,

Role of music meant for our life. It's just blessing to have a company making like beautiful and better. Beautiful composition sirji.

The journey with moon and earth and the waves and fires play the perfect role fof

Yes sir this is indeed inequitable love. Very well written. The co