~ Inebriant Universale ~ Comments

A good prayer for nectar that will give eternal life to understand some the universal God's creations.

Wonderful poem having a lot of wisdom and depth. The ideas are interesting and the style is innovative. I liked the poem. Nice write.

Nectar of life the wonder why we are here I too booze with getting drunk with fresh air.................as I write I view the wonder of life on TV showing the birth of a baby elephant..luvli coincidence Niv...regards...10/10

I love the way you express you word. To be fulfilled is the high of life. Great way you set it all up and end it.

I love the way you heal language especially the word 'booze'.

great a10. a cry for content.a keen desire to be satisfied 'sip and lap ' words to try to contain or(inhale) the sheer desire to live. enjoy it very much.thx for invite

the universe indeed always interesting to in tell about in your poem made satisfaction against the universe by inhaling the universe and keeping always his freshness then will make us calm. Good write 10/10

meaningful and so so good to the ears

Reminds me of the famous Rabindrasangeet 'pran bhoriye more aro aro aro dao pran'. Beautiful and sublime. Thanks for sharing.10++++

A very heart warming and heart felt poem that inebriates the universe. Good Write NIV. Your friend Lynn

a wonderful piece in itself...a fantastic style...thank you for sharing...

To be be filled with life is in and of it self fulfilment and provides content. Just a little in unison with the universe is awesome! ...sweet nectar [75 years of it], provided sobriety after, celebrating my birthday [26th] truely a sweet poem. a ten...altho the vote does not register

Fulfillment is itself that Inebriant… To relish that one has to Sip and Lap and such state is short [LOL]: Ecstasy, rapture, rhapsodic so ‘…Like just hap…’ it is humble explanation to Poet Paul .. Excellent and …well presented...

Honey, nectar sweet ending.

Boozed and binged by ‘Universal Inebriant ‘ Superbly conceived and expressed. Ten++ consciously not by so called boozedly LOL!

This is a beautiful poem

Inebriant and vibrant in focussed imaginations............10++

I found it to be a well written and deeply spiritual piece though I do feel that the stanza where lap rhymes with hap could have done with a more judicious choice of words.

Poet is cautious to enjoy the riches with lick and lap not in one go. So far I understood. Readers please comment. WR

I thought I was beginning to understand this until I got to 'I’ll sip and lap / Like just hap'. Then I gave up trying.