Saturday, June 9, 2007

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crows
long and slender
pencil thin
fly over my rooftop
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Jesse Russell
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Ashley S 14 June 2007

Wow, you write extremely well for somone so young. I love reading poetry with such a fresh outlook to it. Very clean lines, sharp images, excellent poem, Jesse. Good work!

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Porter Daryl 14 June 2007

many writers strive to write this clear and straight forward.

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