Wednesday, September 30, 2015

Indoor Plant Comments

Rating: 4.7

I am witness to the lively conversation between
Indoor and outdoor plant and here it goes:

I am indoor plant, a plant meant to grow and live,
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COMMENTS
Michael Jack 09 August 2020

This poem is now my creative favorite. To my list straight

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Suzon Albert 09 August 2020

Creativity of this poem speaks about itself. Only a poet can write such imaginative conversation...10

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Dhiren Doley 02 October 2015

If the heart remains young that is enough.

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M Asim Nehal 02 October 2015

Very true, Thanks much Dhirenji.

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T Rajan Evol 01 October 2015

Emotional ending to a very nice conversation, Stood beside me and said this tree was my best ally When I was young I climbed on it umpteen times Ate fruits, sat to write my homework and slept And he showed my picture.

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M Asim Nehal 02 October 2015

Thanks much for reading my poems....and for nice encouraging comments.

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Sanjukta Nag 01 October 2015

emotions of a tree you wove so artistically. such a sublime creation of a compassionate and imaginative mind.

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M Asim Nehal 02 October 2015

Thanks much SN, your comments I cherish, the most.

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Valsa George 01 October 2015

A very very imaginative write! I loved reading this conversation between the indoor plant and outdoor tree! Such complaints are so common among humans! Each one has his own grievances.... but how each one overlooks his blessings! For us the grass is always greener on the other side! Top marks Asim!

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M Asim Nehal 02 October 2015

Nice encouraging words, thanks much madam.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 September 2015

A very well written poem, apparently about indoor and outdoor trees, but I see an element of symbolism in it. We have been grown in a house with all protections of a lovely home but those grown up on the roads have a contrast of life than that we enjoyed. Why it's so?

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M Asim Nehal 02 October 2015

Thanks janab, ,

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 September 2015

Here it goes! ! With the muse of the lifestyle around you. Nice work.

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M Asim Nehal 02 October 2015

Thx much. Sir.

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