Indoctrination (Senryu) Comments

Hatred must be a learned trait...It is not a natural emotion... only a defensive reaction against the world at large.

Nice but too short. Keep it up

nice senryu i wish respected poets would leave a short comment along side the poem, it would be so much more helpful in understanding this gentle and short genre of poetry v nice liked

this poem is short but carries a deep message.

Short and thoughtful write. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

Simple but very deep in thought.... keep it up!

good writing, go on, thanks,